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[ZOmbie Wars-Trailer]

well

first of all, for a trailer, have some msuic in the back, like an erie typr of thing, and second of all, this reall bugged me, you didnt have a background!, if you want it to be successful, you MUST put a background in, otherwise its almost an empty animation, and also the gunshot at the end, get a sound effect for that... a gun blast is probably the most common sound affect you can get on the net.

i dont want you to be dicouraged from making the actual movie, because you have got potential, the art just needs to be touched up a little, maybe you could buy a graphics tablet? only if you want to make more animations, but you can get them for £20 on amazin, i dont know how much that is in dollars, if you are american, but its a really good thing to have if your serious about this.

TopHatStudios responds:

Uh.. I have a tablet........and turn up the volume there is music and sound effects.....

[My second first attempt]

this is actually pretty good

i mean the art and animation is amazing considering i assume this is your second flash, and its actually quite decent in length thanks for not wasting my time :)

Alakamame responds:

are welcome

[flinkys random fight]

alright...

well, first of all... i really do see alot of potential in your art skills and animation, unfortunately, i havent seen all of your subs, but still i think that youve just got to spend more time on your animations, and then im sure you will be a very good animartist :) and second of all, pick music that does fir into the flash.... i mean i love that song, but it didnt fit :(

diogoshx responds:

i think that musci fited...

the animal i´ve become... the other became a dragon... lol

ok. you are right i don´t have time to stay much on in the same flash